CIGARETTES [LWT]

gap

[7:40 PM]

[it's been a whole week since Lola and Louis has seen each other. but this time, it's Louis' fault. she calls, he never answers. she knocks on his door, no one's home. she even sat on his porch. he never came out. it's not that he doesn't like her, it's the total opposite. she sits on his porch today, watching the sunset, he has a better view. she has an unlit cigarette in her mouth. Louis finally joins her.]

"lola daniels, that better be a metaphor in your mouth or so help me god,"

"what if it isn't? you wouldn't care anyways."

"okay, what's the problem?"

"i dunno. im only a kid, remember? you tell me. you're the grown up."

"lola, i don't unders—"

"it's been a fucking week. and i know you've been purposely avoiding me."

"okay, that's true. but let me—"

"explain? hm, let's see. are you gonna pull out the 'it's not you, it's me' card? or you just gonna out right lie and say 'ive been busy'? you're nothing but a dirty ashtray suped up on shitty cigarettes and cheap alcohol. i heard there's a party at yours tonight. i hope you have fun, asshole."

"lola, what ar—"

"bye louis."

"lola. don't walk away from me."

"what do you want from me?"

[lola stands with her back to Louis to hide her tears. she hangs her head low, mad at louis but not wanting to be. she doesn't understand why he avoided her after that.. that night. she really likes him, she doesn't get why he doesn't feel the same. she mumbles "i thought you liked me," but Louis doesn't quite catch it.]

"lola, what? speak up, love."

"nothing. bye louis."

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