How not to write a divergent fanfiction

Chatper 3

i woke up the next morning and got redy. 'emerald today is ur choosing ceremony where u choose what district you'll enter' oh yeah i totally forgot! im in ravenclaw with the smrt peeps but i dont like it. At mei choosing serimony I will choose dauntless bcuz I want to leve my mean perents. And so I can be closr 2 me senpai Tobias. (( In this world the factors are:

Erudite: Ravenclaw
Amity: Lovey dovekins
Dauntless: Brave epic Heroes
Abnegation: Senpai's faction
Candor: The honest people nobody likes
So at the choosing assembly i am the first 1 to be called cuz my last name starts with an A but i dont remember what it is exactly. oh well.
i skip down to the circle of bowls and stab my hand with the nife. it goes all the way thru but i dont notic cuz i amused to severe pain 4 some reeson. I deceded to choose senpai's faction so he can notise mei.i watch me blod sizzle on the cols like a stek. my parents didnt cum so they wont no im gone till tonite. nobody cheers 4 me. that is not suprizing cuz noone likes me. they just star @ me as i walk past in my combat boots, riped blak skiny jeens, and lether jacket w/ a red tite tank top underneath.