I FUCKING HATE THIS SHIT OK
Bitch niggas always be writing in present tense and I'm. Sick. Of. It.
It's caught not catches
It's watched not watches
Its was not is
GET IT RIGHT PLEASE FUCKINSVCR
IMMA compare this shit for y'all okay
Heres present tense:
I am walking down the boardwalk to the beach. The sunset looks amazing today! I see my friend Phinchit and I start running towards him. "Hey bitch" i say. "Hi cunt!" He exclaims.
Past tense:
I was walking down the boardwalk to the beach. The sunset looked amazing that day! I saw my friend Phinchit and started to run towards him. "Hey bitch" i said. "Hey cunt!" He exclaimed.
CAN YOU TELL WHICH ONE IS BETTER CAUSE I CAN BYE
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Dumb Fanfic Moments † Everything You Shouldn't Do
RandomIn which I teach you the worst way to write and how to fix it. (If you take offense to this, bitch the door is to your right)
