Hi this is my second attempt for writing a story.My first book The Vampire Prince of Darkness are also available. But it's not finish yet so your votes,and comments are really welcome.I really want to know what you think of the story and your ideas to make it better would also be greatly appreciated. Okay here is the first part so enjoy.
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The start of something new.
Lia's pov.
"Just remember this is going to be a new start for all of us.It would be like a start of something new,you see,now cheer up.It's not that bad".
That's my mom trying to convince us by moving outside the city into a small town.Not such a bad idea is.Well mom and dad decided that moving into a small town in Italy would do us wonders.
Well we come all the way from LA to move here in the middle of now where.Away from everyone and everything,that's how I feel right now.Well first of all my friends where shocked out of their skin.
When they heard the news that my parents were leaving,and move all the way to a small town in Italy.The place where my parents first met each other.
And then soon after thier graduation marry. And have us, me and my older brother who thinks he is an adult but is almost there but not quiet.My younger sister who thinks she is the supermodel type that can stole hearts and break them at the same time.
And then thier is me.Well thier is nothing interesting about me,you know.Just a girl who love adult colour in art.And read a lot of books.I have my own electronic diary. And I love writing stories or poetry when I am in the mood.
I like peace and quietness around me.I like to hear myself think and express myself.l like to think out of the box.Well yeah I sound boring not your party girl type.No wonder I am not one of the popular girls at school or have connections to the popular groups.
It's not that I want to fit in badly or anything. I am perfectly good on my own.I am the sort of nerd kind of girl like my brother sometimes referred to me.I am not a normal teenager,just a teenager stuck in an adult's body that's what my younger sister use to say when she is not happy about the things that I prefer to do .Instead of join her for a party or make out with one of her many boyfriends.
Well speaking of boyfriends. Guess there is not must to say about my romantic side of life.I never had a boyfriend before.Not that I am ugly or something. I just never sort of like someone in that kind of way.
The ones that I like is already taken or are players.That doesn't care about a girls feelings.If I wants a boyfriend then he must love me,for me.And no other reason.
Doesn't look like that love ever exist anymore.Those are the kind of romance that only happens in books and movies.Or in your fantasy world.Not in reality."Lia start unpacking your stuff and sort out your room".
That's my mom making sure everyone is doing thier part.And are not being lazy to help sort out our stuff.Well school start next week so better prepare for it now.
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What do you think.I know it is a bit short but I also have to keep my readers guessing.
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Hi this is my second attempt for writing a story.My first book The Vampire Prince of Darkness are also available. But it's not finish yet so your votes,and comments are really welcome.I really want to know what you think of the story and your ideas to make it better would also be greatly appreciated. Okay here is the first part so enjoy.
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The start of something new.
Lia's pov.
"Just remember this is going to be a new start for all of us.It would be like a start of something new,you see,now cheer up.It's not that bad".
That's my mom trying to convince us by moving outside the city into a small town.Not such a bad idea is.Well mom and dad decided that moving into a small town in Italy would do us wonders.
Well we come all the way from LA to move here in the middle of now where.Away from everyone and everything,that's how I feel right now.Well first of all my friends where shocked out of their skin.
When they heard the news that my parents were leaving,and move all the way to a small town in Italy.The place where my parents first met each other.
And then soon after thier graduation marry. And have us, me and my older brother who thinks he is an adult but is almost there but not quiet.My younger sister who thinks she is the supermodel type that can stole hearts and break them at the same time.
And then thier is me.Well thier is nothing interesting about me,you know.Just a girl who love adult colour in art.And read a lot of books.I have my own electronic diary. And I love writing stories or poetry when I am in the mood.
I like peace and quietness around me.I like to hear myself think and express myself.l like to think out of the box.Well yeah I sound boring not your party girl type.No wonder I am not one of the popular girls at school or have connections to the popular groups.
It's not that I want to fit in badly or anything. I am perfectly good on my own.I am the sort of nerd kind of girl like my brother sometimes referred to me.I am not a normal teenager,just a teenager stuck in an adult's body that's what my younger sister use to say when she is not happy about the things that I prefer to do .Instead of join her for a party or make out with one of her many boyfriends.
Well speaking of boyfriends. Guess there is not must to say about my romantic side of life.I never had a boyfriend before.Not that I am ugly or something. I just never sort of like someone in that kind of way.
The ones that I like is already taken or are players.That doesn't care about a girls feelings.If I wants a boyfriend then he must love me,for me.And no other reason.
Doesn't look like that love ever exist anymore.Those are the kind of romance that only happens in books and movies.Or in your fantasy world.Not in reality."Lia start unpacking your stuff and sort out your room".
That's my mom making sure everyone is doing thier part.And are not being lazy to help sort out our stuff.Well school start next week so better prepare for it now.
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What do you think.I know it is a bit short but I also have to keep my readers guessing.
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