Marshmallow Art Club [OPEN]

Art Gallery #1

Hey Mallows! We're very excited to present the Art Pieces of our first theme, nature spirits!

Since this is an art club, we have decided to operate the reviewing a little differently. Every Mallow who has submitted an art piece is asked if they could pick at least one other Mallow's art to review. Of course, giving other Mallows feedback as well is more than appreciated, and even if you didn't submit a piece this time, we highly encourage you to give your fellow Mallows some feedback!

The way to 'review' an artwork is to inline comment on that particular submission, tag the artist and write ways in which the artist has done well in, and areas where they can improve ^^

On that note, if you happen to see an art piece which has already received some feedback, move onto the next one! That way, all Mallows have a chance for their art to be reviewed!

When reviewing another Mallow's art, make sure to tag them so they can benefit from your comments and don't forget to be polite! (although we're sure all you Mallows are very warm and squishy ^^)

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Great work with the overall shape of this profile shot! For further improvement, we'd recommend making the top of the head a little larger so that his face looks more proportional.

A tip for colouring traditionally with pencils, is to colour in the direction of the lines and in a singular direction. Right now, you can see the roughness of the pencil lines in the skin, so try to focus on covering those white spaces fully. For example, following the flow of line art for the hair. ^^

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