Mary sue tester

Danielle

Name: Danielle
I like it

Age: 19
Not bad

Gender: female
Ok

Sexually: bisexual
I haven't seen many bi oc's.. nice

Mate: Roxy
Um.. who?

Backstory: my mother and my father got a divorce after having me for a year. My mom got to take me. My mother married another man who then had my two sisters and three brothers. Their names were Lilly, Tori, Leo, Kyle and Adam. Ages:
Lilly:17
Tori:16
Adam:16
Leo:14
Kyle:7
(I like how she included her siblings)
I'm the oldest of course but I decided to move out and live on my own. I meet a girl at the gun range and she introduced herself as Roxy (oh this is Roxy) (plus I like the way they meet). Roxy and I became roommates, then sooner or later lovers. Anyways Roxy and I live together and got on adventures
Over all I like it :)

Favorite food: watermelon (same)

Favorite treat: rock candy (yes!)

Personality: shy at first but when you get to know her loud and rumbunctious shy is kinda over used but..

Likes: drawing, singing, oceans, fruits, pranks

Dislikes: boredom, art block

Over all it's a great oc. I liked that she was bisexual and how she meets Roxy. But the shy part could use some work. Nice job

Mary Sue: 4%
Originally: 96%
Painfulness: 0%