StarKits Prophecy-- except i read it

ALLIANCES

\\I DID NOT WRITE STARKIT'S PROPHECY, I ONLY DID COMMENTS IN [[]] EXPRESSING MY THOUGHTS//
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ALLIANCES [[First word is wrong. Oh boy.]]
ok so like i said this iks my first story be nice plz [[mmhmm]]

btw its set afte rsunset so

ThunderClan

Leader: Firestar - ginger tom with a flame-colored pelt

Deputy: Brambleclaw - dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes

Medicine Cat: JayFeather-gray tom [[Leafpool just disappeared]]

Warriors:

Squirrelflight - dark ginger she-cat with green eyes

Apprentice, Foxpaw

Dustpelt - dark brown tabby tom

Sandstorm - pale ginger she-cat

Cloudtail - long-haired white tom

Apprentice DaisyPaw - cream long-furred cat from the horseplace [[Daisy wasn't an apprentice...]]

Brackenfur - golden brown tabby tom

Sorreltail - tortoiseshell-and-white she-cat with amber eyes

Thornclaw - golden brown tabby tom

Brightheart - white she-cat with ginger patches

Spiderleg - long-limbed black tom with brown underbelly and amber eyes

Whitewing - white she-cat with green eyes

Apprentice, Icepaw

Birchfall - light brown tabby tom [[definitely copy and pasted but whatever]]

Graystripe - long-haired gray tom

Berrynose - cream-colored tom [[Daisy is an apprentice but her kits are... warriors?]]

Hazeltail - small gray-and-white she-cat

Mousewhisker - gray-and-white tom

Cinderheart - gray tabby she-cat

Poppyfrost - tortoiseshell she-cat

Honeyfern- light brown tabby she-cat

Lionblaze - golden tabby tom

Hollyleaf - black she-cat

FoxHeart-reddish tabby tom [[woah]]

IceFire-white she cat [[that makes sense]]

ToadRibbit-black-and-white tom [[Toad-what?]]

RoseFlame-dark cream she cat [[basically canon cats with different suffixes]]

BriarStorm-dark brown she cat

BumbleFlower-very pale gray tom with black stipes [[a very manly name]]

BlossomWind-pale brown she cat iwth a dark stripe along her spine [[wrong she-cat]]

Apprentices:

Fox DaisyPaw - cream long-furred cat from the horseplace [[That's... exquisite, and why?]]

FlamePaw-firecolored she cat with one grnee eye one blue eye [[she wasn't mentioned before]]

LakePaw-bright blue gray she cat with blue eyes [[nor was she]]

The last 2 r starKits siters [[but Starkit... is a kit. How? Nevermind. Make Starkit stay a kit so she doesn't poison the world with her everything]]