Mr. Akadu & Ms. Bakbak

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hii guys!!

I am trying to write other fanfiction, which I find interesting, let me know you'r views on this story

I hope you people like it:)

some of the scenes will be part of the show, this is not offended to anyone intentionally or unintentionally, it's my own work.

Zubia's character is slightly different from the show. I don't know particularly about the place in serial so it will be little differ from original.

so, I know this story has less views at the moment but I'm hoping some more people read it soon............................:)

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zubia's  pov:

It's already one week in this hospital, i completely adjusted here, Dr. Haroon became more friendly, others also very friendly except Mr.Akadu, he didn't leave single choice to scold me.

by the way Gaiti is not only my best friend, become sister from another mother,

 so it's become routine to meet her everyday, we both went for shopping, 

Gaiti become lonely after Daniyal bhai death, but she never shows pain.

Saim is 5 years old kid, he loves sports, he is the apple of the house and I really like playing with saim.

Gaiti pov:

today as usually i went to park with  Saim, Zubia is sitting in park and her mood is bit off today,so she said " kuch nahi bus  Mr.Akadu is so rude to me,phir sey mujhey dhata"

today 1 girl admitted and it is emergency case, but no other senior doctors present at the time

it is a chemical overdose case, so I attended her case, I know I should follow protocol without consulting senior doctor I can't treat the patent but if i waited for senior doctor to come and attend the patient she would have died but now Mr. Akadu is not even ready to listen any explanation.

woh 1number ka kados admi  hai,timepey jati hu,
haa mana kabhi kabhi late hoti hu par hospital time pey jati hu,😠 duty be jada dere se deti hu, 😡 sab kuch thik se karta hu, magar kabhi bhi koi tarif nahi karta, tarif dhur ki baat woh pura din aisey ghurtey hai,🧐 agar koi galti ho gayi itni baatein suna tha, jab dekha  dhat tha hi rehtay.

yaar mere boss hitler se bhi jada strict hey,mujhe toh vo hitler lagata hey, zubia said

tumara boss tho bada khatarnak lagata yar

pucho mat woh sirf khatarnak nahi, habedank,dashnak, our jitney bhi nak hai  na sare nakh Asfandyar naam se sath lagana chahiye 

huh................ i couldn't control my laugh, so burst into laughing😁😁😄

home:

Asfi and Saim are playing video game, so i made tea and handed it to Asfi

  waisey asfi u never said me u like hitler so much that u started behaving like hitler😜

interesting............ right aj mai  Hitler key sat baith kar tea  pi rahi hu 😉

Asfi made face like what are you talking bhabi🤔

Gaiti: asfi don't make face like Mr. Akadu

Asfi: bhabi what happend to you? why u r calling me hitler, mr.Akadu yeh ajeeb ajeeb naam 😦

gaiti: waisey mei nahi a naam meri frnd ney diya

asfi: what?😲

gaiti: actually she works in ur hospital😳

Asfi: jaroor Ms.bakbak diya hoga...where did she meet you? 😡

Gaiti: wait a minute now who is dis Ms bakbak🤔

Asfi: ek doctor aya mumbai sey🥴

itna bolti itna bolti kya takthi nahi kya...............😷

bhabhi u know what first day itself she didn't turn off her phone🙃

 do you know bhabhi her ringtone is to loud and  ajeeb  hai, hamesha phone sei chipkey rahithi.

kabhi kabhi maan karta hai cell phone ban kardo from hospital📲

do u know bhabhi she drinks espresso, making face who drinks espresso woh bhi morning morning 🙄 

now she started complaining my family members instead of directly facing me.....

you didn't say where did you meet her

Gaiti: I met her 1 week back in park, instantly become my best friend,

by the way Ms.bakbak  doesn't know you are my Dewar.

If she comes to know, I don't think she will feel comfort around me so I don't want it, she is the  only friend and sister I have got from years .

So I am not revealing that you're my Dewar and we are related.

you're also not going to reveal........ Do you got it  Mr.Asfandyar

by the way your new names are so cute Mr.Akadu😍 and Ms. bakbak😘

small smile playing on gaiti face, crazy name:)

interesting asfi lot of years I heard you talking about girl this much.

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