Author: cUaroundDcorner Story: Natalie: The awakening Target Reader: 17+
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INTRODUCTION
Honestly, I'm a bit speechless when I read the book two. I've blown away. Woah! What an incredible intro and every dropped of scene was literally amazing. I am afraid now how I am going to give my advice to you the fact that I should be the one who will be needing your advice?
I twice asked you this, DO YOU STILL NEED ME? 🤣
I am so very proud 😢 to be your critic from book one. I saw the BIG changes. You know what's good in a person who knows how to accept criticism? Humble writer? Whatever they learned, they APPLIED it to their stories. 😏👍
(Hindi ako kasali rito. Matigas kasi ang ulo ko at may sarili akong rules. Chos😂😆.)
Technically speaking I personally love your writing style now. TPP suits you very well.
SHOW and TELL is present. 👍 Five senses gives me goosebumps. 😨It feels like I am watching them live specially the BS. 😂
Hindi sa maharot akong tao kaya pabor ang story sa akin, it is just that the author expresses her story very well. I can tell now your unique way of writing though some of the sentences are familiar to me. HIHIHI especially sa nagsusuntukang kilay. 😅
