Author: Katearvijhen Genre: Teen Fiction Readers: 13+
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1. Plot
Mortal na magkaaway si Kyle at Grachelle. Kungbaga sa tubig at mantika, e pilit mong pagsamahin ay kusang naghihiwalay dahil sa asim ng turingan nila sa isat isa. Given on the blurb their parents do some action about it. And they became friends and build a secret feeling for each other.
I will be honest here, the blurb sounds cliché. Nowadays it is hard to think a new concept, kahit anong genre pa iyan. Unless the author will do some magic inside the book. So I was one of that person who is looking for something unique that will make my interest keep on reading the piece.
Did the story keep my interest?
50\50 ang sagot ko riyan.
Why? Because of the blurb. I think it revealed on chapter 15 and I am still waiting for the drawing scene if Grachelle found out the drawing what could be her reaction? Naghihintay ako sa pasabog pero wala pa rin, lalo sa kanilang dalawa ni Grachelle. Dumating na nga si Ysabelle, pero wala pa rin. Too slow that it became drag. Napakaraming nangyari. Naroon an pag-build up sa relationship ni Kyle at GRachelle nang mamatay ang parent ni protagonist lady, pero nganga pa rin. DRAWING YATA ANG RELASYON NILA. XD
2. Narration
2.1 Wrong application of Flashback.
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