sketchbook poem #1 -> untitled

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here's the first of a series of poems i wrote today. i might call it "light remains" or "blue."

Every step I take
Leads me into a deeper blue
And everything at stake
Will somehow lead me to you

Everything I love
Is slowly pulling me apart
And all the stars above
Rip into my worn-out heart

I know you're somewhere
Free of former pains
Watching the sun tear
Strips of light into night
Until nothing dark remains

what do you guys think? i think it's ok.

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