cortex the assassin

the campfire

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The chaos army was in their cabin, which was bigger on the inside than it let on. There were three floors, the ground floor had a huge living room, with six avaerage sized couches, all joined together to make one long couch, the couches faced a TV and had 10 different racks of video games on the left side of the tv, complete with 20 different controls, which were wireless. On the right side of the tv were 12 different racks of movies. Then the living room sectioned off into a good sized kitchen. At the back of the living room was a door with "meeting room/dinning room" on it, which contained a long table with chairs on either side.
On the second floor was a massive gym and on the left there was a door which read "weaponry" which consisted of 200 different weapons of size and shape lined up against the wall. On the opposite side of the gym, was a door which read "library" which was only organised because all you had to do to find a book was say it's title and it would float to you. To put it back you just have to put it in the room and it would float back to its place. On the third floor is all the bedrooms, which has your name on the door, and can style itself to what you want your bedroom to look like. All the bedrooms comes with a single bed, a walk in closet, a shelf to put your stuff on, a bedside table, a plush carpet, two beanbags for visitors, a desk, and an ensuite. Oh, and everyone in the chaos army has a bracelet that can call chaos when you press the button and you can't walk in the front door with out permission from the chaos army, and you can't walking someone else's bedroom without the permission of the owner.

Anyway, the chaos army were all, on the couches, either lying on them or sitting on them, watching castor and Beckendorf play each other at Mario kart. They all had their cloaks off, as no one can walk in without permission.
"I wonder who the hero is." Cortex suddenly said. Everyone looked at him.
"What?" Percy asked
"Percy, it's obviously you." Bianca said.
"I'm pretty sure I'm not the greatest hero, it's probably gonna David." He said with obvious disgust and disapproval.
"That imbecil? Gods forbid!" Luke exclaimed, looking horrified. Everyone burst out laughing, then castor fell off the couch, which made everyone laugh harder. When the laughter finally died down, castor stood up "I'm going to see Pollux" he announced, with that, he grabbed his cloak, put it on and walked out the door.

Castor went around to the archery station and saw Pollux. He watched him shoot another arrow, hitting bullseye and splitting the arrow that was previously there. Castor walked up to pollux and tapped his shoulder, he turned around and looked at castor.
"Ive got to show you something." Castor said. Pollux sceptically looked at castor, and seemed to have an argument on his head. Curiosity took over him and they trudged to Zeus fist. When they got here castor stopped and turned to face pollux.
"How did you know that this was here and knew where to go? Why are we here?" Pollux asked, looking suspicious.
"To answer your questions..." castor took off his hood and Pollux gasped. Then flung himself at him.
"I thought you were dead...how?" Pollux whispered.
"I was dead but chaos let me live again and join his army. " Castor replied.
"Castor."
"Yes?"
"If you've traveled the galaxy have you seen percy?"
"Um...you have to ask Cortex."

Percy, Pollux is asking about you, and I told him that he should ask you, so get ready.

*Sigh* K. Thanks

The horn for dinner sounded and everyone made their way there.

The chaos army was sitting at the chaos table, chatting in their minds, when Pollux walked over to cortex.
"Um.....so I heard that you traveled the galaxy." He said. Everyone was listening to the conversation.
"Um yeah..."cortex said
"Have you seen Percy Jackson?"
"Um.. yeah, I met him once, but why would you ask that if you hate him?"
Everyone shifted in their seats uncomfortably.
"But does he forgive us?" Asked Pollux. Cortex saw Annabeth had a hopeful look on her face. Cortex was about to answer, when Zoe jumped up.
"forgive you??? FORGIVE YOU??? HE TRUSTED ALL OF YOU AND YOU BETRAYED HIM!! HE HAS NO REASON TO FORGIVE YOU!!!" Zoe screamed at him.
"Hey, star, calm down." Beckendorf said to her in a soothing way. Still fuming, Zoe sat down. All the campers looked crestfallen. The hunters, who came earlier today, nodded their head in agreement and they glared at the campers. Thalia looked ready to kill the campers. cortex then caught Zoe staring at the hunters wistfully.

You can reveal your identity to them if you want. Cortex mind linked Zoe. She gave a slight nod in response.

The rest of dinner was eaten in silence.

At the campfire, everyone,including the Gods (who had come partly because cortex was there), gathered around. Annabeth sat in the middle.
"Today I will be telling you the story of Percy Jackson, whom we all wrongly accused him of a horrible crime. Today I will tell you his first quest."

Great. Cortex thought, and accidentally mind linked it to everyone

I just realised, you never told us about your quests. Beckendorf mind linked

Maybe because he's too modest for his own good. Bianca mind linked

I so wanna hear this! Selina mind linked

"When Percy was 12, he went to Yancy......" Annabeth said.

Cortex then stiffened. He doesn't know how he knew but planet 1745 was in trouble, the planet Kira was on, he then looked further into it, ( by that I mean what the threat is, idk how he does it but just go with it)

"Schist" cortex muttered. Beckendorf, who was sitting next to him heard him.
"What?"
"Oh nothing, planet 1745 is in trouble, got to go." Cortex explained, then dissolved into mist.