This advice is what I considered as a risky advice because it's very difficult to say.
When writing an gay erotic story you must make the sex scene more steamy and romantic.
For example: Junji kisses his lover's neck, feeling Hanabishi's naked small body writhing beneath him on the bed.
Another example: Minoru sees Akito standing by the balcony of their bedroom without his shirt on, revealing his eight pack abs, and beckoning him to come forward.
Not like this: He brought his slutty lover into the room and fucked him raw.
Or like this: This guy told this other guy to strip now.
Always make sure that sex scenes you've written are more erotic and romantic so that way it won't be described as too smutty or too FSOG means Fifty Shades Of Grey.
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How To Write A Gay Erotic Or Gay Erotic Romance
General FictionEvery feel tired of writing the same old stories? Have you ever wish to write a story that involves some bondage? Well then look no farther. There are advices on how write a gay erotic story. I know it sounds weird you'll understand what I'm getting...
