1.) Remember , the readers only see what you tell them. You might know it's in a busy coffee shop, but they won't unless you cue them.
2.) After you set the scene, add subtle reminders about where they are e.g. character stirring coffee with indignation.
3.) Don't put your characters in dialogue boxes. It's tempting to force characters to say something for plots' sake, but avoid thus! Rework the dialogue leadings up to it or have someone else say it.
4.) Make sure you don't drop characters! It's easy to forget about side characters. Don't do that. Even small actions can make a scene feel more complete.
5.) Use more than just visual description and sounds. Smells, textures and even tastes can really bring in your audience.
6.) If you're struggling, use the classic "put yourself in the scene." Go a step further and write the scene from your own perspective. This will help you get a good feel for it. Then you can rewrite it easily.

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