Bonus/Original

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The sun beats down on me relentlessly

Caressing my face with a gentle warmth

As the wind gently plays with my hair

Tossing the coppery waves about

Playing with the fiery tendrils

Before moving on.


A/N: Thoughts?  Comments?  Do you prefer this [older] version, or my newer version from the prior chapter?


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