I like this one. It is basically an AU where basic Joshua ditches Erica and Erica goes to ben then Erica kind of was conned to think that Ben was ditching her and put a wall of ice and then goes back to Ben. So let's do this.
I crept along stealthily next to Erica, my hand on my gun. A gunshot rang out from behind them, and I immediately twisted around and fired my gun. Someone returned the fire and I was soon lying on the ground, hunched over in pain. "No... Ben" Erica whispered. I clenched her hand, and my eyes soon fluttered shut. Erica hunched over my lifeless form, crying. "Cut!" the director screeched. "That's a wrap."
I do like this. It is so drama!!!!! Give it 44/50. Tho it's not done it is quite good! hope you finish the book!
Also thanks for the 74 views. Pls, stick with me!
And I am glad there is no mysterious voice here this time.
I am still here...
SHOOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M GETTING OUT OF HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Well, that was quite a reaction
