OK for a reward... I will be posting two today!!!!
BEEP BEEP BEEP!
The alarm clock went off. The boy who owned the alarm clock groaned. He slapped the top of the clock, effectively stopping the alarm. He squinted his eyes, trying to get adjusted to the light. He slowly pulled off the sheets on the bed and sat upright. He slowly trudged to the bathroom. As he entered, he rubbed his eyes, trying to get the sleepiness that filled them to disappear. He glanced at the mirror. There, in the glass, was him. He stared at his reflection in the mirror. In front of him, there was a 5 feet 5-inch boy. His eyes were brown, and his hair was also brown, but a lighter brown, like a mix between blonde and brown-haired. A few years ago, he had been scrawny, but ever since then, he had grown stronger. The boy's name was Benjamin Ripley, but his friends just called him Ben.
This is a nice story, it has a nice plot. However,it is not done yet. Cookie, if you are reading it, try to add a bit more action. 44/50. Congrats!
