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The title goes very well with the poems inside the book, it describes the emotions you have tried to convey through your poems, but I feel a change in the title, that is giving it a unique name would draw more attention to the beauty inside the book.
Moving onto the cover, the cover is really pretty but doesn't match upto the genre that is poetry. It may seem very eye pleasing but a change in the cover and title, such that it gives the reader an idea of what to expect in the book is required.
I won't deny the fact that I simply loved your poems alot, there were raw emotions and the right use of metaphors, simply making your poems beautiful to read and truly meaningful.
Your writing style is very unique in terms of how you describe a scenario and the efficient use of certain phrases, is simply mind blowing.
The grammar is on point. A few small mistakes could be overlooked and edited if you go through your poems once again.
Overall I really enjoyed reading your poetry book.
