I'm going to be rewriting the story but instead of it being a reaction store it's going to be a normal Adventure fanfiction rather than the betrayers reacting to what the people they betrayed are doing.
it's just going to be mainly focused on how the Betrayed coped with what happened to them a more detailed description of how they met and how long it took for them to become comfortable around each other because to be honest with you I have no idea what to do with this story anymore I have ideas in my head but they don't work with how the story itself is set up it's setup to show the betrayer is reacting but it just doesn't fit at all together I've reread the story there are many errors and there's that one chapter where rev asserts his dominance I haven't forgotten about that so yeah.
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the Betrayed Adventures (Being Rewritten)
Randomso I've seen stores where it's jaune and he's been betrayed and the traitors are reacting to his adventures and then I seen stores with My Little Pony and Spike has been betrayed and then there's one where it's Naruto he's been betrayed. and that g...
