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This is a Shatterproof by tala natsume review.
The first three parts of this story that we are going to review are 01|Started Off Ruthless, 02|Background Check, 03| Eva; The Downfall of Men
I appreciate the creativity and effort to include photos throughout the story; although I think it is a lot of work when the writing alone should be enough to perfectly describe the setting, etc. in a novel. We should also give room to our readers to customize the descriptions to their liking/based on how they imagined it. Moreover, I read this story in offline mode, kaya hindi kita 'yong mga pictures which, if other readers do this too, wasted ‘yong effort sa pag-upload ng pictures.
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But again, I appreciate this effort and creativity, although I don't find it necessary. . .
01| STARTED OFF RUTHLESS
• I love the narration-style. Smooth basahin. Mukhang wordy kung titingnan pero kapag binabasa mo na, lahat ng nakatipa sa narration ay necessary. Hindi masyadong pinabulaklak at tuloy-tuloy ang flow.
• Kahit pulido ang pagkakasulat, may mapapansin pa ring ilang errors sa unang tatlong chapters (grammatical/typographical).
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( In the screenshot above, an em-dash is not necessary. Separate sentences na ang 'One mistake...' at 'Do you understand?')
