CHAPTER 1

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Ek Anjani aur Andheri lok (planet) mein,
sm1 : Aaj mere barso ka badla pura hoga baalveer ka ant karne pe itna mazza nahi jitna use harpal tarpakar marne ka ha ha ha (evil laugh ) 😈
sm2 : aisa kya karne wali ho tum
sm1 : tum bas dekhte jao (evil smirk ) 😏

Scene changes, In Dagli House

Meher: ee lallu uth......kab se so raha hai 10 baj gaye hai aur tu abhi bhi ghore bech kar so raha hai
Ballu: (in sleepy tone) Are meher aaj Sunday hai na so school chutti hai mujhe sone de na
Manav chuckled with his statement. Meher expression was like "kuch nahi ho sakta iss lallu ka 🤦🏻‍♀️"
While ballu was sleeping peacefully, manav and meher sat together and started discussing how they killed Prachandika also were making the plan to defeat the other evils. Ballu heard their discussion.
Ballu's pov "Bhot acche manav meher aise hi tum log acchai aur sacchai ke sath dete raho aur apne kartavyo ko humesha nibhate raho. Mujhe garv hai tum dono pe."
Ballu gets up and went for his morning chores.
All three then went to dining table for breakfast. "Bhabhi jaldi se khana dedo bohot tez bhook lagi hai." Said Rocky in childish tone. "ha ha rocky bhaiya yeh lijiye garam garam khana, aayo baccho apne jagah par baitho jaldi" said Smita while serving food.
The entire family was eating food with full love and happiness bonding when suddenly "tik tik tik tik" awaz aane lagi. Aur isse pehle koi samajh paaye ki ki woh kis chiz ka awaz tha "boooooooooom" ek bada sa blast huya ghar mein aur ghar jal gaya.

2 months later, in Veer Lok
"Ah! Mera sar itna dard kyun kar raha hai ?" exclaimed baalveer while rubbing his head. He looked around and found a complete new place it was a beautiful room but it wasn't pari lok either. "Yeh mai kaha hun?"
"Shaant ho jaau baalveer, aakhir kaar tumhe hosh aa hi gya" said someone who was coming towards the door of the room.
"Shaurya!" said baalveer with surprise "aap, matlab mai veer lok mein hun lekin kaise aur kya huya tha shaurya mera sar itna dard kyun ho raha hai? Ma, Rani pari, Pariyan, Baalsakhi, Baalmitra kaha hai shaurya? Kya hua shaurya aap shant kyun hai batiyena" he asked all these in one breath getting very desperate for his answers.
"Shaant baalveer, woh..............." said shaurya with sad tone.
"Kya? Yeh yeh nahi ho sakta....yeh nahi ho sakta" said baalveer with tears rolling down his cheek continuously. He sat on the floor as his soul is separated from his body. He shouts in anger and full rage along with pain.

To be continue.......

 Readers:- Lekin shaurya ne bola kya baalveer ko aur 2 mahine pehle kya hua tha?
Writer:- Sabr ka fal meetha hota hai it will soon reveal in the story filhaal ke liye suspense , lekin ha yeh keh sakti hun ki iss incident ke baad se almost baalveer bejaan sa ho gaya tha, uss incident ne use sab kuch chin liya ab andaza lagalo ki kya huya tha and right you thoughts here 👉

Bye bye 👋🏻


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