I have read this story and I think everything is good expect for the one part, [8]. What do you think about it, is it to much? Should I re-write it? Is there anything you don't like about the story?
Do you have anything special that you want to happen in the story?
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𝓽𝓮𝓮𝓷𝓪𝓰𝓮 𝓵𝓸𝓿𝓮 - ᴀsʜᴛʀᴀʏ
FanfictionNate Jacobs's sister Chloe Jacobs finds herself in love with a boy named Ashtray. But it doesn't go so easy when her brother feels so much hatred for him and his brother Fezco.
