Cover: 03/05 The cover is fine, but there's a little too much going on. The 'O' is not completely visible due to the blending colour schemes. Plus, the white and red misty shades blur out Jungkook's face which feels a little weird. It could be better if the misty shades are erased a little.
Title: 03/05 Though there is no mention of why that is the title in the book yet, the title sounds aesthetic and attractive.
Synopsis: 7.5/10 The synopsis is good. But the '[OR]' could have been simply replaced with a center-aligned '-' or just a paragraph break. You should give more description in the second paragraph where you mentioned they are in a different universe and stuff, because it confuses the readers a lot but the good part about it is that confusion attracts some people. It could be a little longer too. The contents could be in the summary chapter, no need to put them in the blurb itself, but if you do want to keep them, this one is fine.
Execution: 8/10 Though the book has only been in one phase right now, this phase seems pretty nice. But it got a little slower than needed in the 10th and 11th chapter, but it is fine.
Plot: 15/20 The plot seems a little confusing, and from what I've read till now, it seems like it's going in the right direction, but there's no need to stretch it, you can start with the next phase if you want now.
Writing Style: 19.5/20 The writing style is amazing, I love it, it's short and descriptive at the same time, and it is very attractive to readers! Keep it up, author-nim!
Grammar and Vocabulary: 19/20 I'm absolutely impressed with the grammar and vocabulary, it's amazing. Though there's some minor mistakes I'll mention.
In the first chapter, there's a line "Ahn does anything but." you can add 'that' after but to make it clearer!
In the first chapter, some paragraphs above this one, there's a sentence "he finds that" it could replaced by "finding that"
In the second (probably) chapter there's a line "you assigned to a project" i would suggest to change it to "you assigned me to work on a project"
In the chapter where Jungkook meets Tae, Tae says that they have as a reply to Jungkook saying they were there. But it should be "Yes, we are" as the dialogue has here and reached.
In the same chapter, there's a dialogue, "no fair" there should be a comma between the two words. And in the dialogue after it, there is supposed to be a comma before hyung
These were the only grammatical mistakes/typos I found.
Characters and Development: 9.5/10 This section has also been written smoothly, the characters are nice and descriptive and their development is also sensible and smooth.
Total: 84.5/100
Final note: I love this book, it's well written and the plot at least till now seems nice, the flow is also smooth.
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