ꗃ﹕❜ Minerva ❯❯ A review shop [2.0]

×. ❜Reveal [Rev. Claire]

Book Name: Reveal
Author: @vampirequeen1006
Reviewer: ClaireMari29

Cover - ⅘
I liked the graphics made for your story, it was beautifully made, yet since your story was a fantasy type, my suggestion though was to show the different sides of the MC, the one side of her being plain, and in her daily life, and the other of her in that “fantasy wonderland” maybe from there, more people will be interested to know more about your story.

Title - ⅘
At first, I was slightly confused about why your story was titled “Reveal”, yet as I do read your blurb, I can see that it can relate much to your work, I can see the concept behind it as well, which impresses me the most and piqued my interest to read your work.

Synopsis -8/10
To rate your synopsis, I decided to read your blurb for it, and judging on the way the blurb was written, it got me piqued to read your work, the synopsis matches the concept and the title made for the story as well, which is good.

Execution - 8/10
Looking at the way you executed your book, I am proud to mention that you made your work very good based on the characters as upon you made Chapter 00, you managed to make the character's introduction, which is good as it will help other people to understand your characters very well. I am also pleased you also made the Chapters Structure very well as it can also feature the best layout for your work.

Plot - 17/20
Im no fan terms of fantasy works, however, to judge your plot, I will refer towards the blurb. I am pleased to explain that the plot seems very unique to me, as it can be a possible adventure for the MC at the same time.

Writing Style - 18/20
Judging from your writing style, you managed to use 1st POV, which is fine as you are trying to explore the character’s POV for the MC, You managed to write nicely, yet I suggest you also make some details more in your first POV writing, by adding more narration as it can make the story better.

Grammar and Vocabulary - 19/20
The grammar and vocab of the story seem fine, yet I suggest that it needs more proofreading, despite that, it’s very nicely made.

Characters and Development - 9/10
The characters of the story are made well, thanks to the character introduction page, I had known the characters well, the story development seems well too as the pace is not slow or too fast, it’s fine.

Total - 87/100

Final Note: You need to work on your writing, maybe you can have your work to be edited as I suggest, yet despite of that, your work seems fairly made, I congratulate you for the awards of your work.