The next morning, they were both out searching for food and dried sticks, suddenly, someone from the back hit their head... both became unconscious
After quite a while when Hansel's consciousness came back he found themselves tied to a boulder and surrounded by thieves...
Suddenly, a voice of high authority appears out of nowhere...
Man- So, these are the children whom you got? Do you think they will do good?
Sm1- Yes master. They were roaming in the forest and weren't scared. I think they are good enough for your decision...
Man-(grabs Gretel's chin harshly) So, kid, tell me, who are you?
Gretel- I-I.
Hansel- Leave her! Don't touch her!
Man- Ohhh??? Overprotective I see.. so you tell me brave kiddo, why should I leave her? What would I get if I leave her?
Hansel- I don't know! Just leave her!!!
Gretel- Hansel don't do this(whispers in a scared and weak voice)
Man- OOhhh... So sweet aren't you both? How about... we make a deal? You tell me if you want to stay with us and become one of us and we shall leave your sister... I promise, and my promise is a true promise child...
Hansel- I-I.
Suddenly, there is a sound of a hound... the guards surrounding them started to panic... the man, who was the leader decided it was high time they had to leave...
Man- We need to leave! Quick! Take the boy! and run!
The man took out a knife and slashed Gretel on her stomach, blood started oozing from her.
Gretel- AHHH!!
Man- It is for your good child.
Hansel- Noo.!!!! Don't do this!!! (Sobbing and trying to get free)
Soon the guards came, and the chief general of the guards decides to save Gretel first. This gave the man a chance to take the boy by force and get far away from the guards with his people...
Like this, Hansel and Gretel were separated, never had the brother-sister duo imagined that they would be separated like this, but guess what? Destiny had its plans...
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TIME INTERVAL - 10 years (Hansel- 19, Gretel- 17)
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A boy dressed in black was running away from the guards, jumping from building to building with guards on his tail, he tried to escape. Tricking some, beating some, and confusing some he escaped.
Who was the person in the black mask? Girl or boy?
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So, what do you think? Who is this person?
Think about it.
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