{ These are just quick and simple questions I'd like to ask you guys.
First off, how is the story so far? Is it good? Bad? Needs to be more descriptive in some parts?
Also, what do you guys think of the relationship between the reader and Thorfinn? Is it nice and "organic" enough? Or does it need more work? Sorry for asking so many questions, especially this early on, I just want to know if there are possibly any problems in the story that might need fixing. And want your input. }
YOU ARE READING
𝐕𝐚𝐥𝐤𝐲𝐫𝐢𝐞 𝐁𝐨𝐮𝐧𝐝 𝐢𝐧 𝐂𝐡𝐚𝐢𝐧𝐬
Fanfiction"You blessed us with your light, so don't be selfish and take it away" { 𝕐𝕒𝕟𝕕𝕖𝕣𝕖 𝕋𝕙𝕠𝕣𝕗𝕚𝕟𝕟 𝕩 𝕄𝕠𝕣𝕘𝕚𝕒𝕟𝕒 ℝ𝕖𝕒𝕕𝕖𝕣 𝕩 𝕐𝕒𝕟𝕕𝕖𝕣𝕖 ℂ𝕒𝕟𝕦𝕥𝕖 } { I've caught up with Vinland Saga and that's half the reason I've made this }
