Not A Chapter

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Hi Everyone!

No this isn't a Chapter but I wanted to take the occasion of a recommendation from someone in the comments to have a Heart to Heart with you all and respond to some questions

First, I want to thank everyone who had read so far, this is my first story that I write and honestly I am surprised of the number of people who had read this already, so thank to you all to have gave this story a chance 😁

Second, as English isn't my first language, I apologize if there's sometimes grammatical errors, I honestly do my best so that you don't have your eyes burning at the end of this, I promise!

As for the speed of the story, I know that it's kinda slow for now but as practically everything for now is completly improvised and I have things Irl, it takes time for the chapters to come out but don't worry, I am not stopping this story anytime soon! There's still quite the ride and we're not even 1% done!

Also, for the ones saying things like "Vegeta was born with 500 Units, not 7000, this is too much" or "This person did not act like this in the show".
I would like to remind you all that this is a Fanfiction and my own take of a Dragon Ball story, this ISN'T supposed to be canon, tho the base of the personalities will remain, there WILL be small changes as the story goes on

Although, there is sometimes some mistakes of inattention like attacks badly transcript and other small things that I apologies for, because as I said, most of it for now is almost complete improvisation and I write as my ideas go along so... yeah, sorry for that, tho critics are welcome and help improve my writing style, please be polite and do not comment to only be mean, as it will not help whatsoever and it will only be ignored, I only write this story for people to just chill and read some Dragon Ball stuff and if you do not like it, you can just not read it and continue with your life

Last thing before I change topic, I will not do requests that concern the story on itself like pair this person with this person, as all of the major plot points are all already set, tho if some people wants to see some fluff between some characters already present in the story so far, you can suggest ideas and I will see if it's possible and if I can implement it somewhere, and if it is, whoever had suggested this idea will have his/her name at the end as a thanks (if this person want, of course)

I now will do a quick Character Bio of my Oc and her relationship with everyone (with some commentary) that is important so far at this stage of the story, as requested by someone in the comments

Personality : She's quite arrogant and prideful as she has grown up as one of the strongest of her race, meanwhile, she still can be nice and caring with the people she likes or respects (Mostly her parents), the major downside of her is that she risk to quite oftenly speak mean or violent things impulsively but will not necessarily thinks what she says, Raditz being a good exemple, she sometimes says that she will drag him through the ground if he's annoying but she did not a single time abused him physically until now, it can also be her methods of helping, it's quite brutal she can admit but its for his own good if he wants to choose the path of the warrior

Relationship :

-Parents : Bardock and Gine (Her parents are really precious to her and she will protect them with all of her Heart, Bardock's serious personality is what she respect the most in him as he will not hesitate to drag her through the ground if she needs a wake up call and she's really grateful for him to not sugarcoat her, tho his hugs are nice.
As for her Mother, even if her gentle and caring personality is a little overwhelming to her sometimes, she does not unwelcome it)

-Sibling : Raditz (Her relationship with her brother is kinda ambiguë, at the start, she wanted nothing to do with him, but as he had grown older, he had continuously wanted to follow her and imitate her as well as prove himself and she would lie if she hadn't found it cute, tho, even if she was agreeably surprised when he had challenged her, she's not really convinced that he will be able to do much without that much training, but she will see where this will go and if he's worthy of her time)

-Best Friends (?) : Vegeta and Komatsu (Her two favorites training partners, the first (and only) children of her age who were capable of trading punches with her without breaking their own fists.
Vegeta with his high and mighty personality is not that unpleasant when you learn to know him, fun to tease and a great Friend over all.
As for Komatsu, She was her first real match where she really had to give most of her all, and she was far from disappointed, she managed to tank one of her most powerful attacks and didn't even faint! Well at least not right away but it really was impressive and she gained her respect no doubt, also great friend)

Sensei : Nappa (Saiyan Veteran, he is really supportive and gives good advice most of the time.
Tho pretty much goofy, he can be serious if he wants to, also good friend?)

-Others :

King Vegeta : Vegeta's Father, she's not really sure what to think of him honestly, on one hand, her Father and him are pretty much good friends and he's the reason she was not pretty much killed as an infant.
On the other hand, his attitude and after witnessing her King almost dooming their entire race by selfishness just to keep a pillow to himself, she not really sure now that it wasn't just for the benefit of his son that she's still alive to this day, tho she has nothing against his son (she pretty much sure Vegeta inside himself doesn't like him either) she's really disappointed by his Father and will keep her distance with him for now)

Toma : My Father's right hand man and the Father of Komatsu, not much to say about him apart that he's really nice to speak to and gives good advice

Carole : Komatsu's Mother and the royal SAIYANtist, same as Toma, she's really nice to talk to and she's really impatient to see what her Saibaiman experiments will lead to and if she can train against them

Whis and Beerus : A weird bunch, the little interaction she had with the blue man were nice but she's not really sure what to think of them, tho she feels better with them as far away from her planet as possible

Well, I think that's it, thanks if you managed to read all of this and I guess I'll see you in the next Chapter? Bye bye and until Next Time in the next episode of...Dragon...Ball...Z!

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