I went through and slightly edited the grammar/removed unnessacry little things in the early chapters, and reading them gave me this feeling I can't really describe. Nostalgia? I don't know if that's right, it wasn't that long ago, but looking back on all the silly little shit the characters did back then, and what they're doing now... sheesh. I had no idea I'd escalated it as far as I did. The evolution is wild you guys.
And yes, I edited chapters 13 and 22. Chapter 13 makes me shiver at the memories of mindlessly writing it at 2 AM while chapter 22 is lowkey kinda good, I won't even lie.
Edit 12/2/23: I edited chapters 9-32 today, like I got right up and the morning and went straight to it, and I think that's all up until it matches my current writing. All I have to say is, guys, the biggest issue I had, the thing I had to edit out most, was, get this:
Unnessacry ellipses.
You know, like the three dots? Yeah, there was an unbelievable amount of those littered around the chapters up until that point. Thankfully, I think I dropped that around chapter 33, so I think I'm going to stop editing now. I'm all caught up.
Also, take this great song I re-discovered today. It's a gem, very nostalgic for me, and one of the best FNAF songs I've ever heard. Give it a listen, please.
Edit 12/4/23: Jk more editing lmfao
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Maizen: Return of the Zombies
FanfictionAfter an accidental zombie outbreak overtakes a majority of the human population, JJ makes it his goal to find the cure and save humanity, like he's always done. With the help of Mikey and his former comrades, a mission is set in place to complete t...
