Celestial Stardust: Mini awards [JUDGING]

Poetry Genre (winner)

Hey everyone! We want to express our sincere gratitude to all of you who entered our award contest. Each and every one of you did an amazing job, and we appreciate your efforts and talent. If you didn't win this time, please don't be disheartened. Keep writing and keep participating in future contests. Your dedication and passion will surely lead you to great achievements.

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- 1st place holder -

Book name : versify
Author: Aravis-Brightspell
Judge:Anmol_Kaira

Title: 9/10
Organization: 9/10
Poetic Elements: 19/20
Originality: 20/20
Grammar: 9/10
Development: 9/10
Creativity: 19/20
Overall enjoyment: 94/100
Review: You are really amazing poetess. your way to carve the words is what I loved the most. You got me to the world of your poem. The way your poems are deep and heart touching. You have perfectly used everything like poetic elements and grammar. I m impressed with your imagination skills, they are incredible. All the best keep going…

- 2nd place holder -

Book name : Aurelia Days
Author : lunaticclunaa
Judge: Anmol_Kaira

Title: 9/10
Organization: 9/10
Poetic Elements: 18/20
Originality: 19/20
Grammar: 9/10
Development: 9/10
Creativity: 19/20
Overall enjoyment: 92/100
Review: Firstly, Comment for all the poems “EMOTIONAL, OVERWHELMED, INCREDIBLE”. The depth of your words really grabbed me into the poems. I really was getting the goosebumps, with each para ending. You have carved it so nicely but what I felt if you add the poetic elements your poems would get more meaningful with the attractiveness.
Your imaginations are so powerful and the way you framed it really made it more amazing to read poems. All the best and keep going…

- 3rd place holder -

Book name : Sunshime Be Mine
Author: Cheems1234
Judge : Anmol_Kaira

Title: 8/10
Organization: 8/10
Poetic Elements: 17/20
Originality: 18/20
Grammar: 8/10
Development: 8/10
Creativity: 18/20
Overall enjoyment: 85/100
Review: You are an amazing writer… Everything is amazing but what I felt is if you use the grammar properly like giving the punctuation at the time needed and proper usage of poetic elements. The use of the poetic element will give it more effect which will make your sentences more effective.
And what I felt was for making the rhymes you have mixed up with some of the sentences which don’t make meaning. So if you could get the rhymes at proper places it would make it more amazing.
I think if you use more effective words like take an example from your 3rd poem there is one line about dreamt things, so if you use “illusion” in place of dreamt things it may sound like: “I realized I have illusions, which I know won’t ever come true.”
The rest everything is perfect. All the best for your future works.

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