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Title: 4/4 The title of the story is eye-catching and suits the story perfectly. It would be good to add subtitles.
Cover: 3/4 The cover is well-designed and neat to look at, but it didn't catch one’s attention perfectly. The idea of the cover is good but it just came out well.
Blurb: 4.5/5 The blurb is an amazing piece, it is a nicely crafted summary of the story. The quote you used was good, maybe some rhetorical questions would make it more interesting.
Writing style: 10/10 The writing style is pretty good, like a novel. It's just perfect.
Character Development: 5/5 There is a good character development, I mainly like the character design of Krishna was perfect, calm and firm which was perfect.
Grammar: 10/10 The grammar used is so good, no objections.
Vocabulary: 10/10 The vocabulary you used is rich and strong. The vocabulary really fits the atmosphere of the saga.
Plotting: 12/12 The plotting is something I never read, it is intriguing and fascinating. At first I thought about Palakshi, like what she will do alone and I never expected that Radhika would meet Mahalakshmi at her first encounter.
Emotions: 10/10 Emotions were perfect, the dialogues also held emotions and gestures.
Creativity: 8/10 The creativity was good, you writing a summary about the chapter in the end was a good idea, and the banner was fine yet I would suggest you make a background similar to the Wattpad background so it would look good.
Worth reading: 9.5/10 I really like the facts on Krishna and the Dwarka. I would recommend this book to all. I was delighted by the plot you wrote. It was a good experience.
Overall impression: 8/10 Overall, everything is good! You just need to improve in cover. It’s just a start as you are still writing this book and have gone to 7 chapters. You are doing well.
Total: 94/100
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