So I've been working behind the scenes on a different story (Walking Dead - Daryl Dixon) and I would really appreciate it if you could read this tiny bit of a chapter cause I need to know if it needs changing.
I wanted to put what everyone was tasked with so it showed how they work together and such but I'm not sure if it looks right.
Everyone had something to do, weather it was a multitude of Jobs like Rick (Watch shifts, Fortifying the shelter, Stock checks, Hunting with Daryl, Scavenging and being the overall leader), Daryl (Watch shifts, Fortifying the shelter, Hunting and Scavenging), Hershel (Stock checks, Doctor – teaching ---RETRACTED--- and Carol the steps on C-sections, Ricks voice of reason/guidance) and ---RETRACTED---
Having a few jobs but were versatile to do anything that is needed like Glenn (Watch shifts, Scavenging and Stock checks), Maggie (Watch shifts, Scavenging and Stock checks) and T-Dog (Watch shifts, Scavenging and Fortifying).
Or were kept in the safety of the house with a few everyday chores like Carol (Cooking, Cleaning and Weapon training), Beth (Helping with cooking, Helping with cleaning and weapon training), Lori (Cooking and Cleaning cause Hershel wants her to rest) and Carl (Weapon training and Watch shifts with Rick).
Thank you for helping!
(The retracted is to hide the parts I don't want to reveal)
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Scrapped Ideas/Stories
FanfictionThis book contains all my scrapped storylines and writing that I have done through the years. Nothing in it will ever be complete as I changed my idea and have rewritten it. This is just so I have somewhere to put them as some of them I did spend a...
