Chapter Eleven

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A/N. reviews.

"I still can't wait for the Gods to find out Percy is King of Hell. It'll be lively" -JettShay

That's gonna be a little bit away, lmao.

"He easily kills demons, but has to br saved from a bear? You need to figure out his skill/ability level and then keep it more consistent." -jfrost22792

You know grizzly bears weigh in at two hundred and fifty pounds at the very least according to the U.S. national Park Service? If we said percy weighed in at two hundred pounds, that puts him in a different weight class than the bear. And all that is ignoring that HE DIDN'T EVEN FIGHT THE BEAR! (As in, fight without Riptide, since the sword did nothing). Artemis killed the bear before he could hand to hand fight it.

And furthermore, I know how strong he is in this story, because [REDACTED].

"Rereading this I wish you could've shown us more training between Lucifer and Percy cause it just feels like he's gonna be weak against most of the challengers he's gonna face considering they're probably Millennias older than him..." -Sankarea396

Trust me, this will be addressed.

"Gods i love Mephistopheles so pls dont make him rebel against percy!" -Sankarea396

Percy has three ride or dies in this story—Nico, Artemis, and Mephistopheles. So don't worry, he's loyal as Hell (pun intended).

"Honestly this is probably the most realistic Pertemis first date Ive seen considering the arranged marriage, it usually has Artemis blushing and and catching feeling as if millennias of man hating just went away" -Sankarea396

Well thank you! Although, i'd disagree with the man-hating, as I don't see it as hating more as just... avoidance when she can lol.

"Gods this is making me want to watch Hazbin Hotel again" -Sankarea396

Have fun!

"Nice god of war reference" -Guest

Thanks.

"Holy shit, this fic is everything a fresh of breath air in the community bout to binge this" -TheFiction101

Hell yeah!

"Yeah this shit is amazing" -TheFiction101

Thanks!

"Wow the fic continues to blow my mind" -TheFiction101

Thank you!

"This may be honestly the most interesting premise a fic on this site has had for pjo im really impressed" -TheFiction101

That means a lot dude!

"Im confused who knows what exactly and where did they get him from" -TheFiction101

No one but Hades and Nico know. Hermes went to Hades, and Hades sent Nico, and Nico brought Percy to Hermes, who brought him to Olympus.

"Clared up some questions but shouldnt percy gain like lucifer like powers? Otherwise how is he strong enough to rule hell if he isnt even a god tier level being" -TheFiction101

Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

"That ending was badass" -TheFiction101

Thank you!

"I get what you are saying about the power level verseus the title thing. However when you give someone the title king of hell where you stay king soley through power than yeah you need to power him up. Also you say this would make percy op but i disagree it would force the story to have more interesting and powerful enemies than low level monsters. I get you are planning to do this at some point but making king of hell basically requires him to be as powerful as lucifer" -TheFiction101

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