Name: Letters to you
Author: nightowl0708_
Genre: teen fiction
Description:
Mischa, the girl who loves Ashton
Ashton, the guy who loves Mischa
They both write letters to each other... Secretly
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Okay now my turn-
Dearest friend,
you need something strong and appealing for the description.
Because what a reader secondly sees is the blurb. ( first sees the cover)
Your content till now is really good. It's almost well edited.
The language used is so well.
Don't just leave your blurb like that. You already revealed the secret of them loving each other in the blurb.
Suggestion-
Try putting excerpts from the letter in the description.
Leave some questions unanswered. So that the reader will try to find it out reading your book.
Something like-
A- i saw her with puffy eyes and wanted to ask her what happened but I didn't
M- i heard you talking about the new girl. It just hurt me
Now the question is will they ever get to know about each other?? Who is the new girl?
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Do you get me?
I think so 😄
Now Cover-
It's a good cover but you need somethings else. Which catches the eyes of a reader.
The one you have now is a dull one.
You can take help of some people here in wattpad who are willing to make you a really nice cover.
Even i make covers😊
Content:
You are a really good writer, trust me.
I'm gonna read your book till the end.
Your writing is amazing. Keep on updating on a regular basis
( twice- thrice in a week is good) It'll stick the readers to your book.
My ratings- 4/5
Work on your blurb and you are good to go
Kudos to my talented writer friend- nightowl0708_
Do read her book. Amazing content😊
YOU ARE READING
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