The Reader's Perspective

|| Love Of A Fugitive ||

Name- love of a fugitive

author- Hope_Faith_Grace

genre- romance

description- Mark Hillman has gotten himself into a lot of trouble during his high school years. He's found himself in and out of juvy until he finally turned eighteen and was old enough for jail.Minor things. Drug busts, battery assault, vandalizing private property, even running from authority. He's done the crime and he's done the time. Bail money has kept him from spending his court waiting time in the slammer more times than not.But not this time.Just days after turning down big bucks if he did a drug run from the Mexican-Texas border to Seattle, Washington, Mark is arrested as a murder suspect.With the bail fine running well over one million dollars, Mark, now age twenty, finds himself in front of a jury and is being sentenced 25 to life on account of the pre-meditated homicide of Connor Madison- guy Mark's never heard of. So how could he kill a person he's never met? Why would he want to anyway? Murder? Never even crossed his mind no matter how angry he got at someone.But there's evidence. His finger and shoe prints are everywhere, even his DNA. Everything traces back to him.Now, Mark finds himself in behind bars. But he doesn't plan on staying there. He's going to escape. He's leaving this hellhole and finding the bastard who framed him.Soon, Mark enters a small North Carolina town. He'll pretend he's just passing through. Stay for only a few hours and make his move to his sister's place while he figures things out.Then he meets her. A small brunette with dark brown eyes and a sweet smile.Every day he stays in the town he promises himself will be the last, but slowly, he starts to fall for the girl. The more he gets to know about her, the more he feels guilty for lying. With thoughts and memories running through his head, Mark's past is looking for revenge and seems to be catching up with him faster and faster as the weeks go on. It will stop at nothing to succeed. Even if it means hurting anyone Mark holds dear to his heart... especially Liz

NOW IT'S MY TURN... :D

title- nice name. it indicates the gist of the story.

THUMBS UP!!

COVER- it's good but it can be a wayyyy more better..

as i am constantly saying that, cover is the first thing that attracts a reader

so you must choose something more appealing. sure, you've got one hot stuff up there in the cover :D but still, get something more related to the title and the story..

BLURB- sweetheart!! its just waaayyyyyyyyy too long..

this should have been the prologue, you know.

and as a reader i prefer shorter blurb with the hint of what is inside of the book..

there are some errors in sentance formation, which confused me..

STORYLINE- You've got a really nice plot out there. This plot could do wonders and attract a hell lot of readers.

but sweety, again there is bunch of confusing sentances.

in the first chapter, i couldn't even make it out that what is happening in the story..

there is repetition of words.. and all the hotch potch..

but then again, the second chapter gets better. there i was able to make it out what was actually happening..

keep up the momentum and as you did make your second chapter better than the first one i hope your next chapters will do wonders,,

i really like the idea of the story..

mark, the protagonist changes his name every single day so that his real identity is not revealed.

he is a fugitive, and on his run he met this family. the father is a lawyer and the daughter elizabeth or liz.

SUGGESTION-

-you can work on your cover

-make the blurb perfect

-refine the first chapter

i am really sorry if any of these hurt your feeling..

i am giving my honest opinion. i hope this would help your book.

MY RATING - 3.5/5

what will happen to mark?

is he and liz gonna end up together?

is mark gonna get caught by the police?

to know the answer please go through LOVE OF A FUGITIVE by Hope_Faith_Grace talented writer friend

much love.

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HELLO GUYS, AS I AM GETTING MANY REVIEW REQUESTS, I AM DOING THE SHORTER ONES FIRST.

MEANWHILE I'VE STARTED READING THE LONGER ONES AS WELL.

AND YEAH I AM DOING THESE AWESOME COVER THING ALONG WITH YOUR REVIEW :D

PLEASE LET ME KNOW IF YOU LIKE IT