I Hate Him, I Hate Him Not.

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Title: I Hate Him, I Hate him Not.

Genre: Humor

Description: Tiana and Xander have been enemies since their diaper days. What happens when these two are neighbors and have to spend most of their days together. Hell will break loose.

Firstly, I like the cover of the story. It's appealing and eye catching. So great job there.

The original blurb of the book is not bad at all. I find it very descriptive and interesting also. Although it has that quote stuff. All your ("") have been replaced by quot. Just check it out, you'll know what I'm talking about.

Your story is very good, almost perfect.
Interesting plot, Good description. The paragraphs are perfect.
Conversation are easy to understand.
Names are not cliché.
No grammar, or spelling mistakes.

Your story is perfect.

Good job!! 9/10

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