Requested by Ellxehxwell
Title: The broken wood.
Genre: Fantasy
Description: Thalia Venistina lives Ina world where all fantasy creatures are enslaved or are close to enslavement. So she goes on a journey to stand up on the kingdom and fight for the rights of the creature.
The book is good, the idea behind the book is awesome too and it's a great storyline.
Firstly you have to add in more description to your story to explain it more and at least make your chapters longer. Most of your chapters have more conversation without description of what is actually happening.
For your conversation you don't really need to give space before your quotation marks or question marks.
Your story is very okay you just need to make your chapters a tad bit longer with more description.
There were no grammar or spelling mistakes, punctuation and paragraphing weren't bad at all.
Keep writing.
7/10
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