Broken Ever Afters.

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Requested by AdrianaGalea

Title: Broken ever after.

Genre: Fantasy

Description: Quinn Hartley's life is almost perfect. She wants for nothing. Things for her take a wrong turn when her boyfriend gets sick. An unlikely alliance with a strange creature will help her discover who she is; and get a new chance at love, saving the happily ever after of many.

Your story is well written. You seem to be very talented because I really like the way you construct your sentences and how your conversation go.

It's a nice story with an interesting blurb. The description in the story are well composed with no grammar or spelling mistakes, well punctuated also.

The names are great, and I really like Quinn's character in the book.

I'll like to keep reading it because it's an interesting story. So keep writing and good job.

9/10

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