Requested by katjalouw
Title: Jade
Genre: Fantasy
Description: Jade Briar is a master thief. She has been stealing since she was fourteen years old, and has always succeeded. But when she gets caught after five years of perfect streak, instead of being hanged she gets offered a pardon. By doing a mission for the king, she will hopefully gain her freedom. But things get a lot harder when a ghost from her past shows up.
Firstly your story has a great story line. The whole thing stealing thing sounds very interesting and it's quite creative.
The first few chapters I read were well written. Grammar, paragraphing, conversation and spelling also well done.
I like the way you describe your settings, and the happenings in the book. The conversations are well written and easy to understand, so good job.
I noticed no mistake so far so keep it up.
Also maybe a brighter and more appealing cover will attract more readers to your story.
Great job and keep up writing.
8/10
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