Have you ever just read a bio or the start of a story and immediately cringed. I swear every time a story starts out with:
Hi my names ___ and I have chronic depression. I also have a father who beats me when I come home, and I sometimes am known to cut myself. I also am hopelessly in love with Tamaki but he never notices me. Maybe today will be different.
Dear god. Kill me now. Like there are so many problems with that. 1) It gives away her whole life in a few sentences, like why would someone even read this. You read a book to be surprised or intrigued and here this hoe goes telling you her whole life. No surprises, no being intrigued. Just none.
Another issue about these are how she sounds so cheerful yet she "cuts herself" like tf.
Oh, I'm also incredibly beautiful and everyone tells me that but I just can't see it myself.
I have addressed this earlier but damn. I hate this so much.
Bye ReaderChan! Hope you luv luv luv this story and make sure to vote because if you don't vote I will cut off your dick and feed it to the kardashians. Especially Bruce/Kaitlyn
If you see someone who ends there stories like this, call them out on that shit.
YOU ARE READING
OHSHC Cliche's
FanfictionI read a lot of Ouran fan-fiction, so excuse me as I throw shade at some of the biggest cliche's in the OHSHC stories. ✖️The truth hurts, so get it bitterly sweet✖️
