Becoming popular (a Brynn Rumfallo story)

Jacobs true colors

I feel arms wrap around me then open my eyes to see Jacob swimming me up out of the water.We get to the surface and I took deep breaths and tears were streaming down my face." I told you not to throw me in" I said to Jacobs freind."shut up Brynn he thought you were grown up enough to be able to swim" jacob says ."Sorry, I know that I'm a baby for not being able to swim" I mutter "speak up brynny baby" Jacob says "I SAID IM SORRY I CANT SWIM" I tell them he slaps me " don't ever use that tone with me again Brynn ever!" Jacob says."Can you take me home Jacob" I ask "no" Jacob says pulling out his phone." I'm going to the bathroom" I say "whatever" he says back. I walk into his house and since I didn't know exactly where the bathroom is I explore the house. It was huge!! I went up the first flight of stairs and looks around there was 4 bedrooms, 1 giant indoor gym,1 mini kitchen looking room,a indoor pool and a hot tub,and a bathroom plus a bathroom for each room.And that was only the second floor,I go up a second flight of stairs and there's 2 bedrooms,and indoor trampoline park looking thing,a room connected to a rope bridge connected to a huge treehouse,and a like 3 rooms with different kinds of animals. I go back downstairs to the bathroom and use it. Afterward I go down to Jacob who looked rather mad. "What the hell took you so long" he said "just couldn't find the bathroom" I said  he rolled his eyes obviously not believing in the lie that I had just told him,but he shrugged it off." I texted your mom and she thinks your staying with Kendall since I know your mom doesn't have her moms number and she said ok" Jacob says "JACOB what if she finds out I'm not there" I say my anxiety kicking in "ohmygod ohmygod she's literally gonna kill me Jacob I need to go home  I think she can find her nimber in a phone book,whet if she calls and I'm not there she'll think something happened to me then call the cops ohmygod I'm gonna die she's gonna kill me ,I can't die I really need to live Jacob I really need to go home please Jacob she'll kill me if she finds out ohmygod Jacob how could you if I cancel she'll make me stay and make friends and I will have to tell her the truth ohgod I guess I'll stay here" I rant ""SHUT YOUR GD MOUTH BRYNN UOUR BRING ANNOYING " Jacob yells slapping me.i start to cry and go yo he couch ,Jacob Walks over to me and pulls me into a hug " Brynn you know I love you I'm sorry baby girl" he says I smile then he asks me and his friends to choose a movie and we all pick (insert your Favorite movie cuz I can't think of one) .we turn (your movie) on and make popcorn the movie lasted (insert time) and then Jacobs friends went home. Jacob took me upstairs to his bedroom and we paid in his bed we started kissing then it got really heated
Let's just say I lost my virginity.

Hi guys I'm sorry that I haven't updated in forever.I have had a lot to do in school and have to stay most days after school for tutoring in algebra (I hate algebra) should I continue this book??
I don't think it's good but idk if it's just me or if it's really actually crappy Lml sorry again
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