Cahpter 13 The Metang [a Pokemon *checks to make sure is correct* yep, a Pokemon] wit Sartcaln
"Omigish what happnd! shrekd StarPaw [you died, duh]. She looked arung. "am I in Starclan [no, you're in the Dark Forest]?" she eskes when she say the cats that she new.
"No of cours not your in the Daek Forest [oh, I was right]!" gagged a gray he-cat [he-cat? is that a tomcat]. StarGlame locked around windly for TiggerStar but she culd;nt sea him. "Yes your in SatrCaln [so, she said so sarcasticly...]! said the she-ca. It was YellowFang [and it sounds so much like Yellowfang to treat Starshit like fox-dung]. "Wher else wood you be?" [the Dark Forest?]
"Yuo dont need to be so red [calm down, Starshit, Yellowfang can be red if she wants]! said StarGlame she was mad."
sorry said YelllowFang but that made me made." [you mean "made me mad"?]
"its ok" said StarGleam. "but i was in the sark forest so...HOW DID I DYE? [dye... DYE? She dyes her fur purple with lavender!]
"TigerStra killed you [no dip, Sherlock]" said BlueeStar cumin over to her. "he can send cats to starcaln even from the drk Foret"
"Wait so then I'm died [yep]?" StarGlame. "What do i do no? I cant safve the frost [I can just imagen a purple cat saying "I can't survey the frost] like this!" [you can still survey the frost]
"That why we aer gong to send you bak to Thnduer clan!" saud WhitStrip [dang it, Whitestorm, can't you just keep her up here for a little while?]. "But we also have somsing very imptent to tell you first."
"Omg what is it" lauged StarPaw she stinted to jump up and down with joe [Joe? How did you get here?]." "I wnat to knew"
"wel their are ten thigs we ned to give you before you goe" said LeafPool and she gave StarGlame 2 rocks with writting on them. "their the ten commons!" [Holyleaf, please tell me wants going on!]
"OMG THE TEN COMMONDENTS" squelled StarGleam and she was so exited. "I GET TO HAVE TEN COMMNDMENTS?" [you almost spelled it right]
"Ya" said BleuStar "we need to give them to the calns but they wont liten. Thats why we nedd you to do it four us!" [why would the Clans listen to an apprentice-old purple cat if they won't listen to StarClan?]
"Okay" said StarGlame and she left Starclan talking the rocks with her. [leafing StarClan isn't that easy]
