19 The Mirage 1! [great StarClan, this is spelled marriage]
The nex mourni StarGleam wock up and HawkForost was still sleppin next to her. She dint wnat to ake him so she letf he then and went to look for a bunch of ctas to go on parolt.
"JazzSong RedPaw LakePaw FlamePelt your all goint on a parolel to the Windyclna broader [Jazzsong makes border patrols because she is deputy...]." She said and then she went back to her den to wake HawkGorest up she had to tell him sumthn.
"HawkFrost lets get marred [it is spelled marriage]." She cok him up and locked at him expacently as he blined his amber eys [1. Hawkfrost has blue eyes and 2. Why is he blind?].
"Oh sweat [sweat...] that's a freat [Holyleaf, I'm getting tierd of this...] idea! he said." Sould we talthe claN [sure]?"
"Yah thats whu I was wakcg you up [why would you need to wake him up?]." She left the den and HawkfOrst was folowig. "Let All Vats Older To Cath There On Pray Gather Hear Benth The High:edge For A Clan Mettin! [why are these things always in capatals???]
They all gathered even though Milloe [*snort* Milloe... Milo!] was upset that BriadPaw had been hurt [when did you find out? you never read Fading Echos!]. (a/n i havent actually red Fading Eches yet but Ive heard that she gets hurt [ok, but you don't need the 1s and !s] !1!1!1111")
"HawkFrost and I are getting mriaged [spelled maried]!" yelld StarPaw happ;y. Everone startwf crapping [lol, crapping]! They were soooo happly for StarGstar they new she nedded a mat [this is her fourth love interest because there was FiresTas, Gaystip, Blakstar and now Hawekfrost].
"Do you knw what we shuld do?" called out BubPaw [Bumblestripe] and StarGleam didn't want to listen to him because he was stpid (a/n just look at his narem how culd he NOT be stupd [you really need to stop putting author notes in the middle of the chapter]!1?1) but she was ledar so she decided to hurm him. "What is ist BubmFlit" she esked lokoking at the he cat.
"We should go annunce it at the Gathern!" he said and everony chered. They all aruged with him. So the Thhner caln cats left for the Gatherin. But when they got there... they saw... BullStar was dead! In his palsh was... FLAMESTAR! [Flamestar... *Firestar]
