"Life is Difficult"
by MLBrowning
Hi there! It's mangoskies_ (Kat) reviewing your book today. Let's get started.
Cover: It's absolutely perfect. Simple, readable, and intriguing. 10/10
Title: It sounds pretty good. It does a good job at conveying what the story is about.
Summary: It's fine, but you could tell us a little bit more about what the poems will be about. It's kind of vague haha
Premise: It's a neat idea and I think you carried it out really well.
Writing Style: Could use a little more depth and detail, but overall it's nice.
Step-by-Step
One (Is it Real?): Eh, it's confusing but it's poetry so I guess it's open to interpretation. Very deep, got me thinking.
Two (The Petting Zoo): One question... how is this about life problems? I'm not really understanding what a zoo has to do with a difficult life, but maybe it's part of a bigger plot. I was actually really curious about the next poem, because I was wondering what part the zoo plays in this whole thing.
Three (Daily): This is relatable haha. Nice, you have a way with words.
Four (Screaming Inside): The title immediately caught my attention. And it's so sad... it's so relatable to many people, and the way this is written is beautiful. It invoked some serious feelings from me.
Five (Knowledge): Nothing negative to say about this one. Nice job :)
Six (The Pains of Writing Classes): Haha I feel this one so much! I'm also in an online writing course and sometimes it makes me want to tear my hair out! Writing is a pain, and it's so hard but we do it cuz' we love it!
OVERALL: Gosh, this is such a cute idea. Some were sad, some were funny, others were relatable. Overall I would definitely recommend this to a friend, you're a fabulous poet hun. The only thing I'd suggest is putting a little more depth into your writing. Other than that, great job!
RATING: 8/10 stars :)
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Reviewed by mangoskies_
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