HEY , Yes you I need your help! Please give me more dares and asks or if you prefer give me a request and I'll make a story about it! But thats another thing right now I need some feedback about this poem I wrote.
PLEASE COMMENT IF YOU SEE ANYTHING THAT NEEDS TO BE FIXED!! (grammar, spelling,etc)
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Blades
They glow, and shimmer in the sun
They wip and whirl
They twist and turn
They spin dancing as a dancer in the finale act of a performance
They still as there sky darkens
They then start up again wiping and whirling faster as the sky darkens more with metal
They grow and they fall
They repeat
They grow again and
They meet the metal sky again
But the beautiful about growing is that each time
They come back more beautiful and stronger
They grow with the wind
How do you grow?
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I'm not sure how it came out ,but hopefully it turned out good! thank you again if you gave any feedback good or bad. Again thank you
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