- Actually, when I first read your title...I thought the genre was Sci-Fi because of the word "glitch". Hindi ko alam kung ako lang ba pero ganoon talaga ang naisip ko about sa story mo without looking at the genre and your story description. But don't be bothered by that, your story title caught my interest.
• Blurb
- Your blurb is a typical one but it's good enough. And actually, I thought that this story is also a cliche story na nagkalat sa watty. It didn't spoil the plot and the last line left an impact for me and it made me curious.
• Book Cover
- Well, I was actually deceived on this one. Noong una, akala ko picture lang ng isang babae na nilagyan ng pixellated effects since somehow related naman iyon sa title which is 'glitch'. Pero noong tinitigan ko itong mabuti, deym magkaibang babae pala iyon. You did good on this one, though it may not be the most attractive cover...you managed grasp my interest. Keep it up!
• Prologue
- Ayos lang naman ang prologue mo. Hindi catchy, hindi rin boring.
⏺Plot
• Relevance to the Genre
- Your story sticks to your genre which is Chick Literature or mostly known as Chick Lit. As defined, it's usually about the life and problems of young woman/women. As I read through the story, wala namang unrelated scenes or twists sa genre.
• Flow/Transition of Scenes
- Medyo naguluhan lang ako sa biglang laya ni Marcella sa kulungan. Attempted murder is a serious offense. Even though second degree ito, still...attempted murder is attempted murder. If Taejun bailed Marcella out of the prison, how come? I was really puzzled kaya nag-search ako. Since hindi ako law student, hindi ko maintindihan ang pinagsasasabi sa ibang sites until I find this one... Malinaw na pinaliwanag at malinaw na maiintindihan, I hope you don't mind me sharing it to you.
اوووه! هذه الصورة لا تتبع إرشادات المحتوى الخاصة بنا. لمتابعة النشر، يرجى إزالتها أو تحميل صورة أخرى.
- Well, this website is California based so basically these are applied to that country, I don't know if it's also applicable in the Philippines. If ever na applicable man medyo questionable nga ang paglaya ni Marcella. Actually sumakit ang ulo ko sa kaiisip sa part na 'to. Hindi kasi ako matahimik kasi nakukulangan ako ng info sa kung paano nakalaya si Marcella kaya nag-search ako. Pero ikaw ang bahala, may chance na hindi ito kuwestyunin ng readers mo pero may chance din na may magtanong lalo na kung may knowledge sila sa law. I just mentioned it to you kasi medyo naguluhan lang ako at napaisip and potential loophole if hindi na-polish agad. If hindi clear sa iyo or may back up kang reason, you can comment in line.
