(This isn't a continuation of the story, I know it sucks.)
Soo... I wanted to know how my writhing is and what I could do better. Since I am still in grammar school I don't expect my story's to be that good but I wanted to know..
-How you like the plot
-How good the writing is in your opinion
-What I could do better
Please comment your answers.
(Don't worry another chapter will be coming out)
YOU ARE READING
UnOrdinary Fanfic
FanfictionJohn reveals his secrete after having seen Seraphina in the infirmary.... Notice: I own nothing. UnOrdinary is owned by Uru-Chan. If you haven't I recommend reading the Webtoon first
