Kung may English native/English only akong reader dito (sheet ang ambisyoso ko sa part na to hahaha) thank you for reading this, anyway hindi na to English so I could only give you my deepest peace, prosperity and love... For mankind. Haha charot
So, ayun na nga. Natapos niyo na rin yung moment of dissonance and nose bleedingness. Di ko in-expect na ako pala nagsulat ng 6 chapters na puros English. Hahaha. So thank you umabot ka dito.
Share ko lang naman na inspiration ko talaga dito yung Ao Haru Ride. Yung first chap, yung magkikita dapat sila ni Kyo sa park pero hindi siya sumipot.
One shot lang dapat siya kaya wala talaga ako ka-idea kung saan mapupunta ang kwento.
If you noticed, past - present - past alternate ang chapters. Past - 3rd person ang narration, Present - 1st person ang gamit. Maliban lang sa last chapter na both narration ang present. Wala, Arte lang. Haha
I didn't really want some characters to be gone pero wala yun lang yung kinaya ng utak ko. Haha.
So ang ending, dapat si Jemini ang kasama niyang kumatok sa pinto. He stabbed a different person. Na Stockholm syndrome dapat siya pero I changed my mind. Any way, poor girl. Seeing two bloody strangers. Hahaha Pero ayun, pinalitan ko na siya and it's up to you na lang kung anong nangyari.
Dapat may hallucinations ang ating bida na nakikita si Jerome anywhere pero parang hindi naging obvious. Haha fail.
Yung title diba, di ko napanindigan. Haha so pinush ko na lang sa last chapter na ibuhos lahat ng revelation para may 'lies' kuno. Hahaha
And kung may nagbasa nitong FACTS kuno
At binasa ang kwento mula simula hanggang last chapter
O binasa lang ang first at nagskip sa last chapter, thank you. ❤❤❤ kung nagustuhan niyo comment naman diyan, kung pangit comment naman diyan at least I would know kung ano dapat ang i-improve. Hehe thankss.
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