Twinkling Awards 2020 || ✔

✨Anupre - @kashtiiii✨

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The judgements were sent to us on 20/08/2020.

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1) Humdard by RekhaMittal

Cover : 5/5
The cover is beautiful and it shows the exact scene of the story and we know that it definitely is going to leave us wanting for more. 

Title : 5/5
The theme and the title fit in the story well, the dialogue and the song add more precision making justice to the title so great job 

Description/Blurb :3 /5 
You don't get a proper idea of the story when you read the blurb, it's very very vague and the reader will not understand anything except that the story is set in a sad situation 

Length : 8/10
I think the story is a bit too long especially the conversation between Veena, Rajesh and Anurag seemed to be a lot longer than actually required. It could have been shortened. 

Plot :  8/10
The plot is inspired from Kasauti and is a fanfiction one shot based on it. So half of it is what we already know, your improvisations are good but everything is written in a vague manner. The conversations could have got short and the other details could have been specified in a better manner because the way you express things are beautiful but you just focus on the emotions instead of the main story that makes it look a lot diverted 

Grammar : 3.5/5
There have been a few typos and also few tenses have been misplaced, few words have often been repeated while their synonyms can be used. Capitalization of few of the sentences can be avoided, and placing of ellipses and exclamation mark after them in every paragraph can be removed.

Overall impression : 8/10 

Total : 40.5/50 

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2) Tu Yaad Aaya by Confused_Soul_Kriya

Cover = 4.5/5 
The Cover is Absolutely cute and the dark background suits the sad story but maybe a different image of Erica would also be better, but otherwise the cover is actually very beautiful

Title = 5/5
The title is perfect as it is, The song and the story is just in the sync they have to be. 
Readers can actually get the image of the story through the title 

Description/Blurb =    5 /5
The blurb is cut short and crisp, The readers know what to expect and you deliver exactly what you promised 

Length =   9 /10
I think the story is good but a little scene of Nivi publishing the book and dedicating it to Prerna would be a proper ending. Also a little more about their feelings could have been added about how they actually realized that they were in love.