✨Avneil - @Shreyasgsg✨

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These judgements were sent to us on 21/08/2020

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1)MADE FOR EACH OTHER by RiyaMaji

1. COVER-4/5  
THE COVER IS GOOD, PERFECTLY MATCHING WITH THE TITLE BUT IT COULD BE MUCH MORE BETTER. I WOULD SUGGEST YOU TO REQUEST A COVER IN A COVER SHOP AVAILABLE ON WATTPAD.

2. TITLE- 4/5
THE TITLE IS PERFECT FOR YOUR STORY, CLEARLY JUSTIFIES THE CONCEPT OF YOUR STORY. BUT I FEEL ITS A COMMON TITLE THAT EVERYONE USES IT. I FEEL YOU CAN GET A NEW AND UNIQUE TITLE FOR YOUR STORY.

3. DESCRIPTION- 5/5
THE OVERALL DESCRIPTION IS GOOD . IT ENABLES READERS TO GET A CLEAR GIST OF STORY.

4. FIRST IMPRESSION-10/10
THE FIRST 5 CHAPTERS WERE VERY WELL WRITTEN. AS A READER IT KEPT ME HOOKED TILL END.

5. PLOT-10/10
THE PLOT OF YOUR STORY IS REALLY COMMENDABLE. THE WAY YOU PORTRAYED THE  INTERACTION BETWEEN AMREENA AND ALSO AVNEIL IS WORTH READING AND ESPECIALLY THE ADDITION OF HUMOROUS ELEMENTS MADE IT INTRIGUING.

6. GRAMMAR- 5/5
I DIDN'T FIND ANY GRAMMATICAL ERRORS!! GOOD

7. CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT- 8/10
LOVED THE WAY YOU INTRODUCED EACH AND EVERY CHARACTER OF YOUR STORY.

8. WRITING STYLE- 5/5
LOVED YOUR WRITING STYLE . EVERYTHING WAS CRYSTAL CLEAR UNLIKE SOME AUTHORS WHO MESS UP EVERYTHING.

9. LENGTH - 5/5
THE CHAPTERS HAD EVERYTHING IT SHOULD HAVE. 

EXCELLENT WORK.

10. OVERALL IMPRESSION- 13/15
I LOVE YOUR STORY. THE FOREMOST REASON IS ITS PLOT. ITS VERY DIFFERENT FROM WHAT I HAVE READ TILL NOW. WRITERS USUALLY FOCUSES ON THE MAIN LEAD. BUT I REALLY LOVED WHEN YOU FOCUSSED  ON THE LOVE STORY OF SUPPORTING CHARACTERS TOO. 

TOTAL-69/75

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2)THE LAST LETTER(OS) by crush_on_sid

1. COVER 4/5
THE COVER IS SIMPLE YET ELEGANT. BUT ACCORDING TO ME IT CAN BE IMPROVED,  AS THE TITLE IS ABOUT A LETTER SO TRY TO ADD SOME IMAGES RELATED TO LETTER.

2. TITLE- 5/5
THE TITLE IS PERFECT.  I GOT A ROUGH IMAGE OF THE STORY LINE ON WHICH YOU WROTE THE OS.

3. BLURB -5/5
THE DESCRIPTION TOO WAS PERFECT CLEARLY STATING WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN IN THE STORY.

4. LENGTH- 10/10
THE OS COVERED EVERYTHING. FROM BEGINNING TO STARTING; IT HAD EVERYTHING.

5. GRAMMAR-5/5
IT WAS TOTALLY PERFECT.

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