Adventures In The Magi Universe (Rewrinting It)

Intro

⚠️ if ya wanna read this that's fine with me but this is the old version. Right now I'm rewrinting this so yeah :3⚠️

So like I'm just a normal girl who fucking loves anime and manga you know, so all I wish is to read more but you know high school,chores at home don't give me the time I need ,so yeah I'm crying my eyeballs out.

So I was thinking why not do my own story each ,with every anime,manga,cartoon I fell in love with,soooooooooooo here comes nothing enjoy.
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~NOW WE WILL START MY BROS~

It was a long day at high school for our girl Elena, so now she's chilling at home without knowing that destiny will hit hard on her.Oh the poor 18 year old girl................

,,Elena dear?,, ,,Yes mom?,, she said while reading her favorite book..................,,Yes mom!,, ...

,,YES MOM!,, ,,GET YOUR ASS DOWN HERE!AND DON'T YELL AT ME!,, mumbiling , oh my fucking god just say what you want woman. Damn it.

,,Yes mom what is that you desire ohhh~ youre royal majesty~!,, she's laughing well that's not new,,One stop,, she said , Elena rolls her eyes,,Two can you go out and grab some things. Please~!,, she said ,,And what if I say no?,, ,,I.am.gonna.beat.youre.ass.,,she
said in a very angry momy tone, damn those moms...,,Fine uhhhhhh but I don't wanna,, ,,Go,go,go,go,go,go!,,
,,So this is how life is huh? So cruel!,, saying dramaticly staing in front of the opened door.,,Go alre-. How are you crying like that?,, anime tears ,,Lot's lot's of practise:),,
,,OH MY GOD JUST DO WHAT I SAID YOU LITTEL LIFE ,LIVER EATER!,,
,,Oh no the monster is gonna eat me . Oh world save me,, dramaticly falling ........mom holding a baseball, bat where the fuck did that come from?,,Okay,okay I'm going Jesus,,

Not knowing what she's doing she chosed the path of death,....(oh tell me if I have a bad gramar please so I can improve it :) .

SO HOW WAS IT? IT'S MY FIRST FANFICTION SO I AM KINDA NERVOUS:')